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"Everything in the world exists in order to end up as a book." - Stéphane Mallarmé

2017 Writing With The Stars Mentorship Reflection

12/29/2017

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Applications are due next month for the 2018 Writing With The Stars (WWTS) Mentorships. In February 2017, I had the great honor of being selected for a mentorship with Penny Parker Klostermann, author of There Was an Old Dragon Who Swallowed a Knight and A Cooked-Up Fairy Tale.
 
I applied to Penny specifically because of her participation as a critique ninja for Julie Hedlund’s 12x12 writing challenge in 2016. She gave me a critique with the most thoughtful and thorough feedback I had ever received. With her critique and additional feedback from an editor at a retreat, I overhauled the manuscript multiple times before arriving at the version I submitted with my WWTS application. Penny recognized the manuscript and the hard work that went into improving it. I expected that same level of constructive feedback from her as a mentor, and she did not disappoint!
 
Our 3-month mentorship turned into 8 productive months in which we focused heavily on 4 manuscripts, though Penny provided feedback on 6 additional manuscripts! We covered industry best practices, writing resources, formatting tips, career strategy, decoding agent/editor feedback, and much more…in addition to the back-and-forth (and back-and-forth) revision work. Penny was meticulous, honest, supportive, and so generous with her time! She even shared her own work with me, including a sneak peek of A Cooked-Up Fairy Tale before its release earlier this year. Most importantly, Penny believed in my work (and still does) and provided ongoing encouragement that continues to motivate and inspire me today! 

My key takeaways from this experience include: 
  1. It's all about community & putting yourself out there! I'm not sure I would have been selected without that initial connection with Penny through the 12x12 forum. 
  2. Put in the work and take chances! Revision takes time...and sometimes hacking! Explore different points of view, tell the story from a different character's perspective, delete that first line or ending, simplify, etc. Organize your files so you can reference previous drafts if needed. However, you may surprise yourself and never open that original version with that clever-to-only-you ending that you clung to so tightly. 
  3. Find the right critique group and accept criticism with open arms. It's the only way you will grow as a writer. Penny's initial feedback showed me what I needed out of a critique group, and I found those people that help me grow as a writer!
  4. The business is subjective and criticism from editors and agents is hard, but every piece of feedback you get should inform your writing. You may just have to dig a little deeper to see what the underlying issue truly is...then revisit #2 above! 

I cannot thank Penny enough for all the time and energy she put into our mentorship. The experience was invaluable and I heartily recommend applying. You’ve got nothing to lose and everything to gain - even the application process itself is beneficial to your growth! Applications for the 2018 WWTS mentorships are accepted January 8-13. Good luck!
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Penny Parker Klostermann link
12/30/2017 02:47:34 pm

I loved working with you, Amanda. You're talented and smart. You mentioned that I was honest with you. I learned early on that you were confident enough in your writing ability that I could be honest. I think our paths crossed at just the right time in your writing journey. I look forward to hearing great things about your writing!
Thanks for this reflection.

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Amanda
12/31/2017 12:53:21 pm

Our paths absolutely crossed at the right time and our schedules seemed to align perfectly as well! Thanks for taking me on and pushing me to become a better writer. I look forward to seeing more of your work on the shelves also!

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